Would folks mind critiquing my profile?
I'm very curious about the quality of my profile and how it comes across to people, and would be thrilled to hear any of your reflections, thoughts, ideas, suggestions, comments, etc. (I hope this is an appropriate forum question.) The direct link is https://www.rover.com/sit/jeand. I get a good number of requests, but I worry about its length since I put so much depth into it (at least I think I did). Should I shorten it? I'm also wondering if I should mention my rates, dog sizes, ages, etc explicitly in my profile text or not since it's already listed elsewhere. (As a side note, I'm also trying to attract more puppy customers).